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Monday, September 13, 2010
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Walt: Use similes in my writing
Last night we had noodle cantean. It was as hot as fire but as yum as chochlet.I loved it .All that was going through my mind was yum yum yum!
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Room 15 Carlton School
September 13, 2010 at 5:53 PM
Good use of similes Shannon. Well done. Mrs Larsen
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Matthew
September 15, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Shannon i like the story
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Good use of similes Shannon. Well done. Mrs Larsen
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